We are working on making our writing more interesting for the reader.
We have added descriptive adverbs and adjectives to basic sentences. We have also worked hard on developing characters and plot.
Pink Pouakai Fever
Room 13 on Athletics day
Flower Festival Challenge
Looking Fabulous
WALT: add detail to our writing.
ReplyDeleteWe used the following sentence and added descriptive nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs to make this statement more interesting.
The Giant walked home...
The tiny smelly giant sprinted loudly up the hill and teleported back to his smelly brown wood home. By Jade.
The strong giant fled out of the smoke to his large trashed caves that he called his home. As he puffed and puffed he could feel his heart beat as fast as a sewing machine and his sticky sweat falling from his grizzly brow. He always kept the thought in his head, 'I will never eat the kings royal feast again!' By Lele
The heavy ugly giant in his untidy smelly shirt, strided along the forest floor to find a nice plump juicy turkey. He grabbed it, still wriggling and took it back to his cosy homelike burrow. By Angus